Good afternoon, (dear Madam and Sir). I’m very glad to have this honor to take this interview.
My name is XXX, 22 years old this year. I come from Sun yat-sen’s hometown Zhongshan City, (where the father of modern China was born).
My undergraduate period is coming to an end) in Sichuan University, where I major in management science.
(When I was a freshman,) I (used to start) an (business undertaking in my spare time) in the first semester and the result is not bad, (and therefore, affording to take chances), I (risked to) speculate in the stock market in the second semester, (and unfortunately), the result is terrible. After that, (I found that) the trace of my money (becomes) my interest (to) run through my college life.
(As a sophomore), I (taught myself Japanese) and (passed) the JLPT (The Japanese-Language Proficiency Test) Level 1 with 121 point, (which) is the most difficult (one of it ). (As a result), I (was able to use) Japanese in the preliminary test instead of English.
(I succeeded in ushering my junior). After joining the GMC (Global Management Challenge) competition in the firstsemester, I (participated in) the CFA (Chartered Financial Analyst) level 1 test for the reason of learning finance systematically and (passed it) in June last year. After that, I (have realized) that I'm too young (and) too naive, I must take part in the postgraduate entrance (examination) so that I can have a deeper understanding of finance.
(Now, my college senior is about to end). I (plan to) spend half a year (preparing) the entrance test while writing my Graduation thesis on Financial Risk Model in the last semester.
That’s all, Thank you for giving me such avaluable opportunity!
附注
1、dear teachers 属于中式英语，礼貌场合最好用 dear Madam and Sir
2、大学x年级最好分别用 freshman,sophomore, junior, senior
3、讲述的基本都是大学各年级的事情，应该用过去时表示。
4、其他修改之处都放在括号里面。
英语面试自我介绍跟中文面试的自我介绍，在目的和思路上是基本上是一致的，都是为了让面试官对自己有一个快速的了解，重点是给他留下一个深刻的印象，让他记住自己。
先来说一下，在准备英文自我介绍的时候，要从哪些方面展开叙述？以考研为例
问候+名字+本科学校+专业+自己的几个关键词
关于本科学习成绩+获奖情况做个简单说明，重要的奖项可以着重说一下。
科研项目+实践经历+综合能力，这个应该是重点。
未来专业方向+研究生规划，要跟老师的研究方向一致。
再次表达自己对进入目标院校的渴望+感谢
这里有几个句型和表达方式可以参考：
开头：要对老师有个问候。
Good morning/afternoon professors.It’s a great honor to have the opportunity for this interview.
注意事项：一定不要露怯，自信大方！第一段：介绍一下个人的基本信息
I am XX from XX（本科学校）university majoring in XX(专业).
第二段：说一下自己的学业成绩（这里包括专业成绩、英语成绩、奖学金等等）
In terms of academic performance, I studied really hard, ranked first in my major and got a GPA of 4.1. During the past three years, I have successfully passed the CET-6 and won various scholarships and honorary titles.
需要注意的点：
控制时长，简洁明了。
这个一般都要控制在3分钟，切记长篇大论。
如果有非常亮眼的表现一定要稍微展开说一下，比如国奖荣誉、英语强项，可以着重介绍。比如英语能力强，可以放上六级、雅思成绩。
要知道用优秀数据说话，比语言更有说服力的呀（绩点排名、成绩分数等）
突出重点，深化印象
优势要说在前面，自己的特点要展示出来。
了解岗位，结合自身
要对自己今后的工作有个规划和展望，最好能说一下自己的想法，让面试者感受到自己的真诚。
口语一定要流利呀，不要磕磕巴巴的，所以要提前做准备，自信大方，充足准备，要一举拿下哈。